Listening now. Like the intro, good drums too. Not sure on the change up, would keep it more like in the beginning. Instead of going the drum and synthesizer route just stick to noise. If not, a break down would be good there at around 3.5 minutes. You need to stop the drums at one point in time and make some room for noises - not just in outro.
I think you have quite some room for some additional layers. Also some more distortion couldn't hurt. Track has potential but I am not sure where the track is going. It doesn't convey an image in me, I always try to have an image or developing story in my head when I do tracks - but that is just me.
Production of the sound is very good.
posted by: Random Insults on 2006-01-30 08:25:32
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