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Thanks to all for the ideas and encouragement!

Here's the tune I just finished.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusi...

Just click on the first track "Nanites Sacrificing Virgin".

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posted by: noisewreck on 2006-01-28 18:26:57
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Listening now. Like the intro, good drums too. Not sure on the change up, would keep it more like in the beginning. Instead of going the drum and synthesizer route just stick to noise. If not, a break down would be good there at around 3.5 minutes. You need to stop the drums at one point in time and make some room for noises - not just in outro.

I think you have quite some room for some additional layers. Also some more distortion couldn't hurt. Track has potential but I am not sure where the track is going. It doesn't convey an image in me, I always try to have an image or developing story in my head when I do tracks - but that is just me.

Production of the sound is very good.

Cheers, Kai

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posted by: Random Insults on 2006-01-30 08:25:32
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Thanks for the listen Kai. I see what you mean by "room for some additional layers" and that it needs to develop more... and I agree. As to how, well, my good friend, I have no idea! I'll be revisiting it that's for sure :D Soundwise, I wasn't going for all out noise/harshness, but rather for more tribal feel.

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posted by: noisewreck on 2006-01-31 00:08:27
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Ok, if you like that than put some automation on the drums, e.g., vary the panning and eq in long loop-structures. That always gives a good feel :). RI in Neantertal (Modern Society) at soundclick highlights what I mean. Also you could put in some distant tribal singing samples.

Cheers, Kai

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posted by: Random Insults on 2006-01-31 04:34:50
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